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JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA

0 posted 2012-05-20 08:14 PM


Another Misty Morning

Half asleep, half awake –
Sleepy nighttime dreams that
move me to tossing and turning.

You were here again in my dreams.
We were sitting by a winter-thaw brook,
and enjoying the coolness of a spring day.
Being elusive to others around us there…
Such dreams, such dreams,
serene dreams.
I do not want to be without them,
nor can I explain the why of them…

Nighttime dreaming, waking to morning coffee;
I will be thinking of you all day long.
Nighttime dreams that mood me, ever so kindly…


Another misty morning –
Nothing wrong,
It is just I cannot seem to focus.
Yet, I love these misty mornings
my coffee and thinking of you.
Warm thoughts, thoughts that dispel
my lonely-day blues…

This morning my memory cited a scent
of saffron crocus,
reminding me of your gardening.
I am stirred to a smile –
Seeing you all made up for the day, focused,
your plans for your summer garden
planting hydrangeas and roses
and your now especially noted, crocus…

And for days such as this,
I pray,
for another, and another,
and another…

Thinking of you these days,
Brings such joy…


Another misty morning –
Nothing wrong
Just a bit blurry eyed, difficult to focus.
Yet, I love these misty mornings,
my coffee, and thinking of you.
Thoughts of you, which dispel
my lonely-day blues…

Nighttime dreaming, waking to morning coffee;
I will be thinking of you all day long.
Nighttime dreams that mood me ever so kindly…

For days such as this,
I pray,
for another, and another,
another,
misty morning…

.

.


Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-05-20 08:23 PM


Good to see you back, JL, and in as fine a form and involved with the same subject as you were when you left. Sometimes we just can't get them out of our minds.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2012-05-20 08:29 PM


Thanks, Jerry!

Yeah, I just wish I had a picture of her from her REUNION!!  

But I digress...  Yep, I am the same-old broken record.

Than you for reading and your comment.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
3 posted 2012-05-20 11:30 PM


I love it...daydreams...nightdreams...they all are loved by me...great writing...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2012-05-21 01:29 AM


A pleasure to read...James
ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
5 posted 2012-05-21 02:00 AM


You keep writing, JL, about those wonderful misty mornings; they are lovely memories that you share.
Ms. E

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
6 posted 2012-05-21 09:23 AM


Being elusive to others around us there…
Such dreams, such dreams,
serene dreams.


I love it when this happens! So beautiful, your dreamy poetic ponderings!

Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
7 posted 2012-05-21 11:52 AM


Dreamy is the word for it JL! This is sweet as the scent of flowers of which you speak.

Lori

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
8 posted 2012-05-21 01:02 PM


Starttime1955, James, Ms. E, Margherita, and Lori…
Thank you soooooooo much!!


JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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