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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2012-05-19 11:13 PM


the sun vanishes
over rooftops and hills___
moon smiling


twilight fades___
moon on a thousand
  doorsteps


             --- b. e. adams (5/19/2012)



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ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
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1 posted 2012-05-20 02:06 AM


You described the moon wonderfully.
It really does visit my doorstep!
Enjoyed,
Ms. E

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
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2 posted 2012-05-20 03:45 PM


I love the evening as the moon comes up...to me it is a magical time and since I believe in magic it is a wonderful time for me...I could see and feel this Spring Evening...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Startime1955
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3 posted 2012-05-20 03:51 PM


I forgot to tell you...tonight is an eclipse...the sun will be like a ring of fire around the moon...western US should get a great show (western Canada as well)...enjoy

*may our dreams ever be magical*

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