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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2012-05-19 10:45 AM


It’s not to say that the story won’t unfold
according to the dictates of everybody’s soul
and so with heart longing the sea returns
to nudge and goad an awakening
of the so intractable shore.

How patient the sea with her come and go
ever waiting and listening intently
for her name to be called three times
but silence greets her every move.

There will come a time of total withdrawal
but she can’t hold back for ever
and all of the love and agony
will crash back onto the shore.

“Run!” she whispers, shouts, and roars
but the shore in ignorance unmindful
of the consequences
merely looks the other way .

But don’t look at man and his abode
for according to soul dictates
not ever can any transitory “thing”
offer a safe refuge.

Beware, oh, beware, sea’s return
after her total withdrawal
but she offers, of course, a time of grace
for the shore to remain as before.

Time is uncertain and nobody knows
when chaos will reign from peace!

Helen / 19 May 2012

© Copyright 2012 Helen - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-05-19 11:24 AM


Loved the wordplay here, Helen, and the return of the sea is an awesome (hate that word, but it works here) sight to behold. But until it does indeed make it back the shore will remain pristine and lovely.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ebonygirl
Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
2 posted 2012-05-19 03:43 PM


Honeybunch,
I have a strange feeling we're in biiiiiig trouble.
Thought provoking, ms. e

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2012-05-19 03:51 PM


Nice work Helen.
Much to be contemplated these days.
Everything is still alive but it seems to be in the wrong place somehow.
Love the anticipation of unleased strength in this.
Yes, the sea is so beautiful but fire and water out of control are always dangerous.
Loved it and I obviously had some fun with it.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Startime1955
Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
4 posted 2012-05-19 05:48 PM


WOW!!! A stunning vision comes of this poem...with a warning loud and clear...amazing writing...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

MGROVES
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802
california
5 posted 2012-05-20 07:33 PM


my spirit shall rise above the sea
there wil be no drowing of my soul or me


My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
6 posted 2012-05-20 08:20 PM


So much insight...
Love this, Helen.
Great read.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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