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Open Poetry #48

kneads of breeze & birds

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2012-05-17 08:35 AM

I had just shaved against the wind of morning
but you said my moustache wax was still scented
and left a place on your kiss place imagination

like how the rain does the leaves after storms
dressing them in something mostly see thru
but warmer than they were before the knowing

we left smiles behind within our memories
scattered like bread crumbs to find our way
back again, but we brought the birds along also

and set them free on purpose, as they were hungry

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daark

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2012-05-17 09:38 AM

Different vision form with the reading leaving a smile on my face...

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2012-05-17 09:59 AM

thanks ms star

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2012-05-17 11:47 AM

chirp chirp...

ah, they are so hungry...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2012-05-17 12:00 PM

Sweetsun...thank you for the sigh song

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2012-05-19 05:40 AM

Well here you are, the remarkable Marco Polo of poetry.
Love the easy adventure through the lines.

And, of course, wisdom too. Birds have to eat too!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2012-05-19 07:37 AM

Eric...sometimes we toss out pretend "comebacktothis" knowing we never will..thanks amigo

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

7 posted 2012-05-20 07:02 PM

we do come back every now and then

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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