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Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2012-05-13 06:05 PM

Spring’s Call

Birds sing out to one another
each male trying to be the loudest
Ruffling breast and hopping about
wanting to make himself the choice

Nearby a black bird cracking twigs
making them smaller for the nest
Flying to the nearby fir tree
he drops his load then starts again

When next he is seen not alone
gliding as one with wings attached
Still joined together in mid flight
they settle on a leafless branch

All around are the sounds of spring
warming blood within each of us
Smiling I watch the seasons birth
awaiting magic of Spring’s Call

Karen Mc Neil
May 13, 2012

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-05-13 06:16 PM

Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2012-05-13 06:38 PM

JerryPat2
Thank you...when it's spring the heart yearns in all nature (including human nature) *grin*...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2012-05-14 02:33 PM

Star
This surely did give me a real lift in my heart.
You're such a precious person now at the beauty of just being yourself.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2012-05-14 03:47 PM

Thank you Eric...you have always had a way of lifting my spirits...I am on a long journey and I am starting to love the little girl in me...many call me eccentric because I surround myslef with nature and magical thoughts...but it is only because I still believe in the magic of love...a part of me will ever be young for that is where I am happiest...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2012-05-16 12:38 PM

Nature and magical thoughts...count me as ecccentric too, Startime.
Ida

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

6 posted 2012-05-16 07:34 PM

Ida
It is so good to know there are others out there...I am glad you like this poem...*HUGS*

Ron63
Junior Member

since 2012-03-18

Posts 49
Suffolk, Eng, UK

7 posted 2012-05-17 03:57 PM

Spring is a magical time, a time of new birth, freshness and joy. Love the imagery you paint in your poem.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

8 posted 2012-05-17 04:43 PM

This made me smile.

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

9 posted 2012-05-17 06:52 PM

"awaiting magic of Springs Call"
Nice line, Star. Enjoyed your poem,
Ms. E

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

10 posted 2012-05-18 10:03 PM

very pleasant Spring 'snapshot' impression!

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

11 posted 2012-05-19 12:17 PM

Ron63
Thank you...I was inspired by another poem of spring...I am so glad the imagery was clear...Thank you for reading...*HUGS*

Juju
I am glad I could make you smile...spring makes me smile every day as I wake up...*HUGS*

ebonygirl
Thank you Ms E...it felt right as I wrote it...*HUGS*

secondhanddreampoet
Thank you for the inspiration...Your visions are beautiful...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

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