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Open Poetry #48

SweetiePie

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-05-12 04:41 AM

SweetiePie

In Berlin
on Deutscher Lane
there lived a woman
who frequented the dance clubs
but didn't use her real name.
Seems her parents had been spies
and in the service of their country
both had layed down their lives.
A message came to their daughter
that was quite clear,
"You will die also if you don't disappear."
So she took on a new identity
and moved from Dusseldorf to Berlin
and with a new name,
her new life she did begin.
She was nice to look at
and much to sweet to die
and when I met her
in the dance clubs of Berlin
I called her SweetiePie.
Those days are gone now
they were a blast from the past
but she always liked the
name I gave her,
she said it suited
her the best.

JamesLee
11May
2012

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2012-05-12 06:16 AM

What a memory, dear James. And no doubt your sweet name warmed her heart and lingered within her mind.

Small signs of affection sometimes have great healing effects.

M

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-05-12 07:12 AM

Nice...Jerry

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2012-05-12 11:06 PM

What a beautiful memory...a very sweet name that you gave her...well done...

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2012-05-14 02:10 AM

Thank you Margherita, Jerry and Startime for the wonderful responses...James

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