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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-05-12 04:14 AM


Things I Know for Sure

It wasn't only
that her hair
fell below her rear,
there were other things
involved here;
her silky style
her runaway smile
and her red corvette
a beauty I couldn't forget,
Are you speaking of the car?
No, I speak of the beauty of her,
for a woman is softer
and better to sleep with
than a car, this I know
for sure.

JamesLee
10May
2012




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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2012-05-12 06:11 AM


Lovely. You are definitely "spring-affected", dear James!


ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2012-05-12 04:06 PM


You better believe it James and I agree.
Loved the little twists in this.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2012-05-12 04:27 PM


Sounds a bit like George Jones.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
4 posted 2012-05-12 11:16 PM


mmmmmmm Oh yes I love it...well said...

*may our dreams ever be magical*

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
5 posted 2012-05-13 01:50 AM


Enjoyed James,
Ms. E

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