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Open Poetry #48

Mountain Ash in Spring

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2012-05-11 10:05 PM

Mountain Ash in Spring

Mountain Ash
Birds will no longer eat your fruit
So why must you hold on?

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2012-05-12 03:59 AM

Because of the intricate natural identity awarded to life holding on to the very end.

Or, something like that...........

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-05-12 07:13 AM

Dreading to have to give in to defeat and death. Nice poem.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2012-05-12 08:12 AM

Even without fruits a tree is still a majestic view... and it loves the breeze of life on its branches.

This is well done, even if you intended it as a metaphor. It makes one think.

M

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

4 posted 2012-05-12 09:05 AM

Its about holding on to the past instead of the future. (:

The mountain ash is one of my favorite trees

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

5 posted 2012-05-12 03:47 PM

Well done, Juju.
Smiles Ms. E

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

6 posted 2012-05-12 11:08 PM

very well put...

*may our dreams ever be magical*

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