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Open Poetry #48

Sweet Mary

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-05-10 05:39 AM

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Sweet Mary slept and dreamt of love,
And to Mary it was quite glamorous,
She awoke and thought of her special,
And peeked to see that it was puzzled,
And to the touch, sore.

©April 21, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2012-05-10 08:03 AM

I love it when you write like this my friend. There is so much to read into your lines.

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-05-10 08:16 AM

Thank you, Lori, I appreciate your kind words.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2012-05-10 02:41 PM

mmm...one's imagination can really get carried away with this poem...well written...

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-05-10 02:48 PM

Thanks, Karen. Imagination is part of life's little games.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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