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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2012-05-09 12:21 PM

I would see it in your eyes sometimes
how you wondered about your fingers fitting
together like limbs of trees into a sky
and how lovely it was when you moved them
around that certain place that spoke fragile

and then shook them when they became numb
like they were keyboards from within your soul
and you were shaking the letter off of them
leaving partial words around at random sprinkle
hoping the wind would come perhaps to organize

I would see it in your eyes sometimes
when they were closed looking inside yourself
that movement of them under the covers of skin
searching for just the right place to touch
with a glance that would remain always permanent

and you could keep what your heart had just stolen

______________

daark

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2012-05-09 02:43 PM

Nice DS
Beyond the gaurd up there's a depth of possibilities.
Steal away and come again another day.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2012-05-09 02:43 PM

You rank in my top five voyeurs.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2012-05-09 02:50 PM

Eric, thanks bro

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Ms Serene..I am so pleased to be rank...thanks doll

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2012-05-09 07:37 PM

Every time I read this poem I envision something different based on my mood...I enjoyed reading it...
"and you could keep what your heart had just stolen" powerful...

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

5 posted 2012-05-10 06:49 AM

This is you listening to and doing the things that are left unsaid, between the lines. When you hear me [Edited - Profanity Removed - Ron]

[This message has been edited by Ron (06-08-2012 04:03 PM).]

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2012-05-10 08:06 AM

Star, thank you for looking glass viewing this one.

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Ms Moppet...soft and stupid are my favorite colors of shimmer, they taste like love songs. Bring me all you can carry please? Thank you babe.

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

7 posted 2012-05-11 08:27 PM

Now that's just lovely~*~

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

8 posted 2012-05-11 10:06 PM

I really like this one

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2012-05-12 07:47 AM

BBbel1e, thank you naughty daughter

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Ms Juju...thank you sexy eyes.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2012-05-12 08:05 AM

Brilliant, no less!

M

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2012-05-12 08:14 AM

Ms Mar...thanks lady friend

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

12 posted 2012-12-24 12:11 PM

Every time I re-read it it gets better, your way with words as usual leaves me in awe and you spark my imagination...love this....how I wish I could write more like you!

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed. It
is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"
~Kahlil Gibran~

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