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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2012-05-08 02:41 PM


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In this particular moment
Toned in shades of blue
I don’t care that you
Have nothing to say

It doesn’t matter to me
That we met yesterday
Or that all conversation
Betrays incompatibility
As only silence can veil
As makes it possible
For us to be at all

It‘s enough for magic
With the sun going down
That you faintly resemble
Another one   The heart
Will do with who‘s at hand  
To have its way

Be allusion symbol metaphor
Serve your role as her ambassador
It takes so little for you to do
While I listen to her memory
In the sighing of the sea


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Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2012-05-08 05:00 PM


This poem weaves tender thoughts and feelings...this is my favorite part..."While I listen to her memory
In the sighing of the sea"

*may our dreams ever be magical*

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