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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-05-07 05:50 AM



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Wish I had a dollar
For every time I peeked
Through your keyhole
As you tended your unusual

©April 19, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton


© Copyright 2012 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2012-05-07 08:21 AM


Would you be rich my friend? Like this very much.  As per usual your pic is perfect.

Lori

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-05-07 08:22 AM


Naw. Not rich. Might could afford a bottle of cheap California burgundy. Thanks for being here, Lori.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ethome
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3 posted 2012-05-09 04:43 AM


He he there's a classic example of excellent ambiguity.

Clever idea Jerry

true love never looks after it's own interests

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-05-09 05:32 AM


Thanks, Eric.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-09-2012 06:07 AM).]

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2012-05-09 02:28 PM


Very cute, and made me smile.

Well, on the page, it makes me smile.

I can't be held responsible for a reaction in real life, though. *laughing*

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2012-05-09 03:01 PM


I hear you, Karen, real life is tougher than the "page." Thanks for checking the keyhole out.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
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7 posted 2012-05-09 07:39 PM


LOL!!!! Love it...

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JerryPat2
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8 posted 2012-05-09 07:54 PM


Haha! Thank you, Karen, for your good sense of humor.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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