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WTBAKELAR
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0 posted 2012-05-07 12:04 PM



Oft' we dream of things of which
Somehow we wish could come true
We hope and pray
But at the end of day
We find our dreams haven’t a clue,

Yet if we were the lucky ones
If just wishing could make it be
Though fate has a way
Of allowing minds to play
Dreams and reality rarely agree,

Still dreams are often more
Than fleeting mists in the night
I know that it's true
Because I have you
And you are a dreamer’s delight.

The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked.

© Copyright 2012 Wm. Tracey Bakelar - All Rights Reserved
Startime1955
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1 posted 2012-05-07 01:41 AM


Romantically beautiful...well done...you are blessed to have each other

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Margherita
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2 posted 2012-05-07 03:12 AM


quote:
Still dreams are often more
Than fleeting mists in the night


You are so right, dear Tracey. Beautiful write! And I am so glad to see you back here on the blue pages, you were missed ...

Margherita

ps a hug to your dear Mom, who is missed too.


ethome
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3 posted 2012-05-07 04:30 AM


Love that ending because it's a little piece of how we all feel.
Our loved one is the reality of delight.
Great title too.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-05-07 06:07 AM


Ah, if we didn't have our dreams, we would have noting. Reality needs a bit of spice to make things interesting.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

suthern
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5 posted 2012-06-04 01:36 PM


This is so beautiful and romantic! What a treat it is to read your words, dear friend... I miss you bunches! *S*
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