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rabittlover
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0 posted 2012-05-05 03:19 PM


Now here's the most important thing
to be regarded as a sandwich king.
You have to cook it long enough
for the cheese to melt to golden stuff,
but not so long that the bread burns black,
and then a crisp clean flavor lack.
Oh, it takes practice, don't you know
to get the yellow cheese to flow.
But when you've got it down just right,
the hunger pains they do take flight.
Then you add tomato soup.
Oh, that lovely, sweet, orange goop.
Together they're really oh so nice
than anything at twice the price.

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1 posted 2012-05-05 03:27 PM


Well now...you've just described one of
my very favorite food combos!

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JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-05-05 03:48 PM


That settles it. One grilled cheese coming up on 12-grain bread, gotta love it! Later for the soup. Nice first write, rabittlover.

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Startime1955
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3 posted 2012-05-05 04:13 PM


My mouth is watering...one grilled cheese with tomato soup coming up...welcome to passions...
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4 posted 2012-05-05 05:05 PM


Yum.  I just cleaned my bathroom and am moving on to the kitchen before making lunch.  I think you just showed me the menu.  I KNEW there was a reason I took a PiP break - it's been too long.

Welcome - I hope you enjoy yourself here as much as I have.

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5 posted 2012-05-06 01:13 PM


This is what I call comfort food!
Enjoyed your poem... Welcome to Pip.
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ethome
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6 posted 2012-05-06 01:39 PM


Oh yeah, I do love a good grilled cheese sandwich. You got it right down.
Made my mouth water this did, yum!

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Margherita
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7 posted 2012-05-07 10:59 AM


So cute! Very lovely first entry!

Margherita

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8 posted 2012-06-08 03:35 PM


You've just made me hungry! LOL I enjoyed this very much!
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9 posted 2012-06-08 04:28 PM


Now I'm hungry too!..
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2012-06-11 09:32 PM


And I thought I was eating Salmon salad tonight...not so sure now...James
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