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Open Poetry #48

Nature's Chaos

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2012-05-05 01:53 PM

          Nature’s Chaos

The Spring night passes with
windstill cloudless skies
of  ten billion, billion stars
over ancient mountain forests
brimming in soft moonlight,
then gently fades to the dawning
brilliance of the morning star
and the boundless random
beauty of Natures’ chaos
and imperishable truth.

                --- b. e. adams (5/5/2012)

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-05-05 02:17 PM

Written like a true, pure poet who reflects nature and nature's boundaries. Very nice.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2012-05-05 03:01 PM

magnificent vision of a warm spring night...I was out last night and the weather was beautiful but it was cloudy...*sigh* there is to be an amazing moon tonight so I will be out hoping to see it...wondeful writing...

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2012-05-07 04:17 AM

Ah, the beauty of chaos,from the pen of the Master poet.
Ida

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2012-05-07 04:34 AM

Got to be happy it's imperishable truth.
The variety of such splendor is almost unfathomable.
Yet you make a lovely poetic expression here for sure.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

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