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ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25
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U.S , Ca

0 posted 2012-05-05 12:10 PM



A while ago
two years or more
though a recent past
to those who are old

two moons ago
yes that is right
what they used to say
just a few months ago

make every moment count
that is what they said

back then when life was simple
and dreams were
well more dreams.

there used to be a word for it
rumored to have a deeper meaning
i think they called it:

time.

yolilitzli (a word meaning life, my names richard by the way)

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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2012-05-05 09:16 AM


Yep, time.
Got any you can lend me, I'm a little short on time.....sigh...clever work.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

rabittlover
Junior Member
since 2012-04-07
Posts 46

2 posted 2012-05-05 04:04 PM


Profound thoughts.
When I go down and clean the basement I find things that we acquired over the past forty years. I am much like archaeologist digging through our own past--mine and my wife's.
The kids remember everything differently, of course.
Your poem got me thinking.

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