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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Mist drifts In from the East There are tall ships Gliding on the horizon line Their faint silhouettes barely Discernible in pale blue light Loud birds have not yet Begun to fill the sky The town yet asleep in Whatever dreams it has Is still Who are these slender girls Not quite women in long White dresses belted with Blue ribbons looking out to sea They move as if unaware Of all that has happened One puts a shading hand To her brow Another turns sees me Standing silently nearby Confused yet unafraid And smiles . |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Exceptionally fine one, John ! |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
The vision opened and was beautiful...wonderful writing |
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rabittlover Junior Member
since 2012-04-07
Posts 46 |
Yes, John, and aren't those sudden smiles caught just when the eyes make contact, just wonderful treasurers. You always give us something to think about. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Magical, John. Ida |
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