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ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25
Posts 284
U.S , Ca

0 posted 2012-05-03 10:44 AM


can you the stop the flow of time?
and make it sweet as lime?
can you give me a clue
so that these pieces of my heart may be glued?
can you hold my hand?
to help me stand?
can you stop the flow of time
wait for me while i cry
can you stop the flow of time
and wait a little more
can you show you care
and stop all this confusion
can you stop the downward spiral
can you stop the flow of time?
can you can you can you
oh i beg i plead i pray
can you stop the flow of time?
can yuou stop the flow of time?
and make it as sweet as lime?

yolilitzli (a word meaning life, my names richard by the way)

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Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2012-05-03 04:14 PM


Somtimes it is sad that time moves so quickly...all you can do is hope time slows a little...
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2012-05-05 09:42 AM


Good poetic questions.
Sadly no answers but evoking thoughts about now.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

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