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Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2012-04-28 07:21 PM

Spring in the Valley I

A sick cherry tree
Blossoms in preparation;
South winds have returned.

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2012-04-28 07:42 PM

Ah, the time when beautiful aspects of nature spring to life.
I can smell it.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-04-28 08:05 PM

spring is in the air
your words so cheerful to me
cherry trees and you

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2012-04-28 08:06 PM

mmmm warm winds and a cherry tree in bloom...what can be more wonderfull

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

4 posted 2012-04-29 01:50 AM

I like this, Juju.
A wonderful Spring poem.
ms. e

dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

5 posted 2012-04-29 10:00 AM

I like this alot.
A couple of delicate little phrases,
a dainty lil write welcoming spring.
Thank you for sharing.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2012-04-29 10:51 AM

Waited to reply because I was hoping for enlightenment without showing my stupidity, but although I basically agree with all the comments, the first line throws me and I don't understand the fit with the rest, unless it's just that spring is going to cure it's ailment, sick not truly meaning sick....

"A sick cherry tree"

??

j.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2012-04-29 02:43 PM

nice, a sick tree reflects so much senses,

thanks

yann

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

8 posted 2012-04-29 03:23 PM

I think what the point is simply that even when in nature when plants and animals sense the end of winter, they celebrate so why cant we celibrate the good even when we are worn down.

-Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

[This message has been edited by Juju (04-29-2012 05:48 PM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

9 posted 2012-04-29 06:43 PM

I like that explanation, Juju.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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