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dreamgal
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0 posted 2012-04-28 01:14 PM


We all came together on this warm April day,
to remember our dear friend, in our own
special way.


Were united in our grief for the loss
we all share, and as memories surface,  
so do the tears.


For she was a mother, a friend,
and a wife, who gave so much love,
to each life, that she touched.


So blessed to have known her,
at least for a time, can help
with the sadness, and bring
me a smile.


For the people we love, never
fully go away, we can find them
in a sunrise, or even in, a rainy
day. Although we can't see them
or feel their special touch. They
remain with us in spirit, and in
memories we love.
RIP AUNT MARY
RIP DAD
RIP DEBBIE
So happy your all together now.
Til we meet again.
All my love always,
  
Denise

© Copyright 2012 dreamgal - All Rights Reserved
Startime1955
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1 posted 2012-04-28 01:35 PM


This poem is tender with memories...It touched my heart...beautifully written
dreamgal
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2 posted 2012-04-28 01:55 PM


Ty Startime, for stopping by today and commenting i always appreciate it!
JerryPat2
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3 posted 2012-04-28 02:01 PM


So you have a real name, and I like the sound as Denise  rolls off my tongue.

Thank you for writing this. It has such a feeling of love and the sadness was held back to a minimum as you delighted in praising the woman who has passed on from this planet earth. It was a wonderful, loving epitaph.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ponderthepoetorrsx
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4 posted 2012-04-28 02:06 PM


well done
dreamgal
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5 posted 2012-04-28 02:15 PM


Jerry, Yes i do have a "real name" not anything special like "dreamgal" Ha! But i am a real person with a name, thank you for stopping by once again, this was for my Aunt Mary, who's funeral was today, thought i'd write a little something for her, nothing dramatic, or thought provoking just a simple write in her memory for a sweet lady.


Ponderthepoet, Thank you for stopping by and taking the time to read this. Much appreciated.

ethome
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6 posted 2012-04-28 08:57 PM


Beautiful, reflections straight from the heart.
Words that are hard to come by sometimes yet you've done a marvelous job here.
I can understand the depth of your feelings, all have lost loved ones over the years and it hurts deeply.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

dreamgal
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7 posted 2012-04-28 11:40 PM


Thank you so much Eric i appreciate your kind words.
Eloise
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8 posted 2012-04-29 08:48 PM


Very heartfelt read.  Nicely done.
dreamgal
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9 posted 2012-04-30 11:18 AM


Thank you Eloise!
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10 posted 2012-06-08 02:27 PM


Beautiful and touching!!
Startime1955
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11 posted 2012-06-08 02:31 PM


This poem brought tears to my eyes...very touching...it helps to know they are together...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

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