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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2012-04-27 11:32 AM


I looked into loving
and saw a lifetime
of wanting me
I heard
a heartbeat’s words
murmuring softly
of needing me
I spoke
to all the tomorrows
of loving me
I touched
that pounding heart
of picking me

LGR©4/27/12
© Copyright 2012 Lori Grosser Rhoden - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-04-27 11:36 AM

Beautifully done, Lori. This one is special.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2012-04-27 11:41 AM

Thanks my friend, I was counting my blessings.


Lori
JerryPat2
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3 posted 2012-04-27 11:42 AM

I know.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~
ethome
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4 posted 2012-04-27 01:25 PM

Lovely thoughts Lori and so well presented in poetic form. Sometimes the simplest things from the heart are so rewarding.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests
Startime1955
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5 posted 2012-04-27 03:34 PM

WOW!!! This poem is so softly beautiful...
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2012-04-27 03:44 PM

Thanks Eric, you are right about the simple things.

Lori
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2012-04-27 03:45 PM

Thank you Startime for giving me a read, glad you liked it!

Lori
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