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Open Poetry #48

with tears in my eyes

ponderthepoetorrsx
Member

since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

0 posted 2012-04-27 10:43 AM

with tears in my eyes
is see what never was
and in my heart
i can do no more than hope
and dream
and paitently wait.

with tears in my eyes
with watery cheeks
under the purple shroud of heaven
i look up
and through the sea of stars
on the other side of society
i see your loving face.

with tears in your eyes.

MICHELMAS
Member

since 2012-02-15

Posts 305
Lancashire England

1 posted 2012-04-27 10:47 AM

a picture paints a thousand words
a tear is infinite

Michael

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-04-27 10:55 AM

Get those tears together . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2012-04-27 11:12 AM

Here's hoping those tears of longing get together soon.
Great idea, enjoyable read.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2012-04-27 03:36 PM

This is very touching...I hope that the tears become tears of joy bringing love together...

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

5 posted 2012-04-27 10:25 PM

Very poignant, tender and heartfelt. LIke the others have said here's hoping the next set of tears will be tears of joy. I really liked this thanks for sharing.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2012-04-27 10:27 PM

Well...mingle those tears, my friend, and make them tears of joy...

j.

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