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Feelings... |
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l'artiste Junior Member
since 2011-12-01
Posts 19Washington |
I think weird thoughts, I know weird things, I see weird sights, And I feel weird feelings. The same thought always comes to mind, The thought that you could be all mine… The thought that we could be together, That I could be yours forever… I know many things, But the thing that I know best, Is that you are the one in my imaginings, The one that knows me better than the rest. I see more than others see, I see details most don’t care for… And in all these sights you will be, The only sight that I adore… I feel different feelings than most, Feelings that I can’t control… Feelings that make me lost, Feeling that have no consol… All of this ties together, In a way… There is a tether, You might say… For me to know, Exactly what my feeling are, I must see, What exactly my heart is thinking of… |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Well said...Only you really know what your heart is feeling... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Stay the course if you heart/mind is clear . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The draw of love that never quits. Well done! Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
I love how this begins with "weird thoughts". Enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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l'artiste Junior Member
since 2011-12-01
Posts 19Washington |
Thanks guys, I was thinking about changing a couple things in there but I am glad to know you liked it... |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
It's the first part of your poem that said it all for me, well done, ms. e |
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