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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-04-26 05:47 PM


    
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when I touched her endearing
tell the truth it was more a fondle
I was surprised to feel the lonely
tear in her eye trickle down fierce
sad at being found to be in bad taste
she said not to touch her abundant
little did she know my own yummy
had grown lively and quite charming

©April 19, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton



~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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Startime1955
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1 posted 2012-04-26 06:55 PM


Tender and quite charming...well said...I really enjoyed the read
ethome
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2 posted 2012-04-26 07:04 PM


Interesting write Jerry.
Some people only hear the voice in the hallway without ever opening up the door again.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2012-04-26 07:12 PM


I appreciate your own charming words, Startime, Thanks.

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Hi Eric. Thank you for taking time to be here. Sometimes it is best to keep that door closed, but I know where you are coming from.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2012-04-27 08:29 AM


This is charming my friend. And you are yummy!

Lori

JerryPat2
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5 posted 2012-04-27 09:17 AM


Haha! Don't know about yummy, Lori, but thank you for saying it.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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