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Spiros Zafiris
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0 posted 2012-04-26 02:54 AM


whisper to me, moon
tell me she lies in bed
wishing for a dream
of me--to please her heart,
to heal old wounds; to simply comfort
~~
..(C)2008/2012 Spiros Zafiris..channeled;
spirit Harmony; reaching into the poet's heart
~~

© Copyright 2012 Spiros Zafiris - All Rights Reserved
Amaryllis
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1 posted 2012-04-26 03:13 AM


I found this oh so lovely and touching....very impressed,  I can't stop reading it. Beautiful, tender. Bravo!

Amaryllis

Spiros Zafiris
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2 posted 2012-04-26 03:28 AM


..thank you Amaryllis..you are too kind..


..>>spiros
~~

katahdin
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3 posted 2012-04-26 03:32 AM


Beautiful, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

Spiros Zafiris
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4 posted 2012-04-26 03:49 AM


..thanks Kat..>>much appreciation..!

..>>spiros
~~

ethome
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5 posted 2012-04-26 04:28 AM


I think many have felt the same. Very well done Spiros. Great mood in such an economy of words.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Spiros Zafiris
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6 posted 2012-04-26 04:54 AM


..friend Eric, i'm pleased much you
like this one..>>spiros

~~

JerryPat2
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7 posted 2012-04-26 05:52 AM


Heartbreaking, honest and wishful. May your words come true for you.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

dreamgal
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8 posted 2012-04-26 07:46 AM


This was very tender, sad, and hopeful. Sweet, i too liked this very much! Thank you for sharing.
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
9 posted 2012-04-26 09:24 AM


...to simply comfort.

That in itself
says it all.




Startime1955
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10 posted 2012-04-26 09:53 AM


I agree with Sunshine...what a wonderful way to start my day...I am a day dreamer so this poem works for me day and night...
Spiros Zafiris
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11 posted 2012-04-26 08:14 PM


..thank you Jerry, dreamgal, Sunshine, and
startime..you are all so kind..>>spiros

~~

ebonygirl
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12 posted 2012-04-26 11:51 PM


Your words are comforting, Spiros.
Enjoyed, ms. E

Amaryllis
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13 posted 2012-04-27 12:37 PM


Spiros, this poem makes me want to do a watercolor

Amaryllis

Spiros Zafiris
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14 posted 2012-04-27 02:11 AM


..thank you Ms.E and Amaryllis
..i'm pleased this tanka of mine
is so well received..i'm
pleased, too, that it has inspired
you, Amaryllis..thanks again..>>spiros

jwesley
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15 posted 2012-04-28 09:44 AM


Ah ... wonderful said, my friend, and so simply.

j.

JamesMichael
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16 posted 2012-04-28 07:23 PM


Very nice...James
Spiros Zafiris
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17 posted 2012-04-29 05:23 AM


..Mr. jwesley and James..>>pleased, too,
you two have read my poem..thanks much

..spiros

~~

Spiros Zafiris
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18 posted 2012-04-29 05:23 AM


..Mr. jwesley and James..>>pleased, too,
you two have read my poem..thanks much

..spiros

~~

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