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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2012-04-25 11:37 PM



Unfolding of Moments


I believe those things
that I can perceive.
In the sincerity of
pursuing a relationship
sometimes you have
to forget desire,
let go of hope and
give up on your dreams
and simply live day
by day in the honest
unfolding of the moments.


JamesLee
26April
2012






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Amaryllis
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1 posted 2012-04-26 12:18 PM


Sometimes that is so true! You sound like a realist  

Amaryllis

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-04-26 09:33 AM


I agree, but it is very hard to forget about your preconceived notions.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
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3 posted 2012-04-26 09:50 AM


Written with unselfish motives of true friendship...I love it
ethome
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4 posted 2012-04-26 07:14 PM


James
Good advice until the next dream comes along.
We are all vulnerable to the leadings of the heart.
I really like this!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

katahdin
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5 posted 2012-04-26 08:28 PM


Oh so true! I really felt this one, enjoyed.
Kat >^..^<

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6 posted 2012-06-04 12:36 PM


I wish I'd read this years ago... instead of looking back and realizing how I sabotaged too many moments. *S* Excellent write!!
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