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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2012-04-25 08:04 PM


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These thousand calories
I gained through drinking
This rum and OJ will probably
Haunt me ‘til the day I die

Ah what can you do
I never after all
Suggested to you

Issa was sober
When he wrote his poems


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Juju
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In your dreams
1 posted 2012-04-25 08:28 PM


I stopped drinking a while... haunted by other things.


Juju

Huan Yi
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2 posted 2012-04-25 08:32 PM


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Juju

Was drinking the problem
or the other things?

Thanks for reading . . .


John


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Startime1955
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3 posted 2012-04-25 08:40 PM


I haven't had a drink in over 30 years...my father had a problem with it and I just didn't want to be that way...taste was a factor as well...powerful words...
Juju
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In your dreams
4 posted 2012-04-25 09:01 PM


Both...

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Huan Yi
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5 posted 2012-04-25 09:08 PM


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Both
but not equal
I imagine . . .


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Amaryllis
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6 posted 2012-04-26 12:29 PM


Sobriety is not a requirement for writing poems  

That said, I am an insufferable uptight teetotaler,  or so say others. That's not fair, I can relax with the best of them naturally! I do have my vices...smoking, sigh.

Best,
A

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