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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2012-04-24 10:37 AM



You fell into my open
as I was slowly exposing
facets to the sun
Your looking got lost
wrapped in my innuendo
daring your imagination
Smiling your distracted
at my unabashed
I couldn’t help but notice
your nodding appreciation
of my descriptive
into your scenic
So I lingered
a moment longer
in your eye’s embrace

LGR©4/24/12

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-04-24 10:39 AM


And he was lost in that eye embrace I imagine. Nice work.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2012-04-24 10:44 AM


maybe so...Thanks Jerry!

Lori

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
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Alberta, Canada
3 posted 2012-04-24 11:08 AM


To linger in his eyes embrace...very beautiful...
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2012-04-24 12:00 PM


Thanks Startime! Glad you liked it

Lori

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