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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2012-04-24 12:58 PM



Shorter Than Forever


If I have a choice
I would prefer to be with Suzie
but if I don't have a choice
I would prefer to be with someone else.
Do you know how long it took me
to come to this conclusion?
Longer than I'll admit
but shorter than forever...


JamesLee
22April
2012


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Amaryllis
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1 posted 2012-04-24 01:03 AM


Very cute ponderings  

Amaryllis

dreamgal
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2 posted 2012-04-24 09:24 AM


Has a sweet and innocent undertone.
I think we all have been there one time or another. We all loose love, but must move on to find another glad it didnt take you as long. Such a waste of time dont you think? Liked this!

Margherita
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3 posted 2012-04-24 09:37 AM


Good for you, dear James. Your loving kindness will attract the right one ...

Lovely.

Margherita

Michael
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4 posted 2012-04-24 10:19 AM


They say our lives are the results of our choices... but much of our lives can be wasted when we don't realize we have a choice.  *Shorter than forever...   that's far better than most of us.

Michael

Startime1955
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5 posted 2012-04-24 11:11 AM


Said with loving truth...well done
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