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Open Poetry #48

Thoughts and Dreams

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2012-04-22 12:55 PM

      Thoughts and Dreams

Here in these ancient forests
and mountains of ‘Deep-Time’
there is only the soft song
of the night wind through trees
  and moonlit shadows
that dance with our memories
  of love and loss.
For the silent, wandering heart
beneath a vast-eternal sky
of endless clouds and stars
in the far-wide universe ...
what price could ever be placed
on a night such as this or
even the smallest thoughts
and dreams of a lovely lady
such as you?

              --- b. e. adams (4/22/2012)

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2012-04-22 03:19 PM

Beautiful poetic ponderings, dear Bruce.
All the magnificence of Nature is free for us to enjoy and so is Love. Priceless indeed!

Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-04-22 04:01 PM

What a marvelous wordplay you have assembled here, Bruce. Tying in the earth, universe, et al, with the loveliness of the lady. Y-e-s-s-s

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2012-04-22 04:18 PM

Softly beautiful

Nicole
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since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

4 posted 2012-04-24 04:40 AM

This is beautiful, and so very sweet. It is like writing a poem on an inhale, and exhale. (probably doesn't make sense haha but it does to me!)

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