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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-04-22 05:46 AM


     
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On my wall I have some doodles,
Don't you laugh, it beats a poodle.
What makes these doodles such a prize,
Each one is crammed with its disguise.
You look at one a certain way,
A naked woman's there, ole!
But walk away, take another look,
A mermaid's swimming in a brook.
There's a portrait of the true God,
Another look, deep throat facade.
Above left eye, a dragon's fire,
Near the nose a fairy inspires.
In lower left a witches tent,
To the right fingers clutch torment.
I love my doodles, they are strange,
Come back later, everything's changed.
The one who scratched the doodles out,
She's good people I'm here to shout.

(c)April 21, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton



~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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ponderthepoetorrsx
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1 posted 2012-04-22 05:53 AM


i enjoyed it reminds me a bit of the poem i just posted (mainly since i felt i wanted to share something but had no one to share with )

yolilitzli

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-04-22 05:55 AM


Many thanks, yolilitzli, and yes, we post our poems looking to share with the like-minded.

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Margherita
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3 posted 2012-04-22 08:29 AM


Strange, yes, but cute, the doodle and your matching words, Jerry. Sometimes indeed it is a matter of a second when one suddenly discovers the hidden objects. But if someone asks you "can you see the fairy here?" ... when we must see it we can't see it.

Margherita

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-04-22 08:37 AM


Oh, you are so right, Margherita . I am amazed at the tings I still constantly "see" and I have had this particular doodle for a few months at least. Amazing talent put this together, doodle or not.

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Amaryllis
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5 posted 2012-04-23 12:55 PM


I laughed at 'Ole!'     That is some.impressive art, did you do it yourself, Jerry? Its much more than a 'doodle'     Fun poem to go with, also.

Best to you-
Amaryllis

ebonygirl
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6 posted 2012-04-23 01:22 AM


Yes, JP, did you do this doodle?
Cool doodle and poem to match.
ms. e

JerryPat2
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7 posted 2012-04-23 05:12 AM


Oh no, Amaryllis , I didn't do this doodle, no way could i do something like this.

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Thanks, ms. e, no, this came from someone else, I can only dream I had the talent to work something like this up.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 2012-04-23 08:13 AM


Way cool Jerry! I swear you come up with the neatest stuff!

Lori

JerryPat2
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9 posted 2012-04-23 08:22 AM


That is nice of you to say, Lori, thank you.

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