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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2012-04-21 03:33 PM

       Love's Fragility

The promise of a rising  dawn,
warmth of a summer sunset,
solace of the evening twilight,
words of a fragile new love,
dancing in the shadows
and uncertain moonlight
to the twin pipes of fate
  and time,
that very first kiss
the very last kiss
All is fleeting …
but her fear and
  intransigence
from the darkness
  of the past.

           --- b. e. adams (4/21/2012)

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-04-21 03:58 PM

Yes, Bruce, I am well aware of the darkness of the past.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2012-04-21 04:23 PM

Everything is fleeting, Bruce, even fear and
intransigence...eventually. I would hope that our heartfelt poems would last forever...somewhere.
Ida

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2012-04-21 05:46 PM

They won't ... especially when they only float across the vast and nebulous cyber-sea.

martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

4 posted 2012-04-21 06:16 PM

"uncertain moonlight"... :-)
I like that

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2012-04-24 12:51 PM

fine writing...James

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

6 posted 2012-04-24 11:36 AM

You words express how fragile love is and yet love can fill one with boundless strength...very well said...

Gumpy
Member

since 2007-11-06

Posts 143
Canada

7 posted 2012-04-25 04:00 PM

I like this very much. Thought provoking. Well written.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2012-04-25 05:37 PM

Oh the heart, the heart, what a treacherous thing it can be.
Damage can't be fixed by any proceedure or surgeon.
Great write!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

9 posted 2012-04-26 01:38 AM

Enjoyed your poem, love is so fragile, yes.
ms. e

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

10 posted 2012-04-26 02:48 AM

..most interesting..

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