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Open Poetry #48

Berrien County

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2012-04-20 01:27 PM

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Autumn
For no particular reason
We decided to spend an afternoon
At Warren Dunes

It took hours to get there
And when we finally arrived
Of all things it began to snow

I didn’t care nor did you
The wind the snow the cold gray air
The mounds of sand that filled our shoes

That’s how it was to be in love
With being in love with you becoming
More than you ever were

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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2012-04-21 12:12 PM

Romantic poetry done well is poetry at it's best.
Ida

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2012-04-23 09:35 PM

Beautiful, John!

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

3 posted 2012-04-23 11:03 PM

Gorgeous, great capture of new love, in your usual brevity and style. Much enjoyed.

Best,
Amaryllis

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2012-04-24 11:46 AM

Ahh...lovers lost in a world of their own without a care in the world...romantically said...

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

5 posted 2012-04-24 11:50 AM

This is a beautiful romantic poem.
Well done, Ms. E

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

6 posted 2012-04-24 12:07 PM

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Thank you all

It's in this
I'm most myself;
our secret . . .

Thanks again

John

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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2012-04-25 08:29 AM

Very captivating.

Margherita

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