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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-04-19 06:06 PM


you let me touch your fragile
it meant the world to me
you said you'd like to touch my eager
and you'd like to hold onto it too
okay I said with a grin
just for a moment's fluttering
she thought she got the best of me
but I held on to my remarkable

©April 19, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton



~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (04-19-2012 08:50 PM).]

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jwesley
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1 posted 2012-04-19 07:23 PM


Interesting take on Chocolate Covered Cheeries, Gummy Bears and Tootsie Roll Pops!!

Cute, my friend...

j.

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-04-19 08:20 PM


Love those chocolate covered ... er . . . Anything.

Thanks, J.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2012-04-20 06:27 AM


This is delightful! lovin' it!
Lori

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-04-20 07:02 AM


Good morning, Lori, thank you . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2012-04-20 07:05 AM


fortunately for you, it's attached.




JerryPat2
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6 posted 2012-04-20 07:09 AM


Heh-Heh . . . Yes, fortunately, Karen, it is. Thank you for pointing that out.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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