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ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25
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0 posted 2012-04-18 10:02 PM


see the waterfall
trickling and endless ray of tears
not of sorrow, joy, or fear
just and endless downward pour
of apathetic tears.

see the fire pit
spewing fourth molten lava, liquid rock
devouring everything in its path
raging
raging
onward onward onward

tis the true epitome of emotion,
passion, pain, and rage
a fiery feel infernal
burning its life eternal
encircling the globe
giving hope
giving light
binding the entire world
with flaming chains
of happiness and spite.

see the ocean currents rise and fall
swaying to the will of moon and wind
pretending to hide mysteries
for the easily deceived
holding awful memories
for those who's wish is misery.

see the high and mighty forest
kept alive by deceitful water
giving way, creating tainted fruit,
there is poison, death on every corner.

up higher higher
the sky full winds hold nothing good in store
shattered dreams
broken hearts
false hopes
wishes never granted.

tis plain for all to see
the only way to go
is death by sanctifying fire
by passion, heat
and most of all desire

© Copyright 2012 richard salgado - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-04-19 05:53 AM


Yet another poem about death. Counting mine this morning, there are three new poems about the demise of man. Popular subject for us poets.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2012-04-19 08:24 AM


tis plain for all to see
the only way to go
is death by sanctifying fire
by passion, heat
and most of all desire

This is the way I want to go....
Loved this

Lori

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2012-04-19 08:40 AM


I agree with Jerry --- and of course he's an "old" man, and I not far behind --- Death is of Great interest to us both!! lol...

j.

ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25
Posts 284
U.S , Ca
4 posted 2012-04-19 12:34 PM


its true its about death but its more about wanting to live and die a life full of emotion
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