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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-04-15 05:44 AM


The moon hangs blood-red tonight
that can only mean
the Goddess and the old man in the moon
are deep in celestial mediation
I, am the only mortal
who can see and appreciate
the Goddess's mystery and her enchanted ways
I stand very, very still
listening in on the moon and the Goddess's serenade
and my
uttermost fears are soothed forthwith
for the music
unlike any I have ever beheld
speaks words to me
instead of notes
with such a voice of love you can't imagine
the celestial music
the Goddess
speaks to me says, I am with you always
though it may seem I'm faraway
and not paying attention
but I am here, forever

her voice resounded like soothing, delicate word/notes
makes me think of word/jazz
I was struck dumb and could only nod
as I felt the lightest
feather-tender brush upon my lips
bells chimed somewhere
sealing into my heart the calming words
the Goddess had just spoken
and the mysterious melody composed
by the Goddess and the man in the moon
raptured my heart with a gentle tug
and I understood that
the gentle brush upon my lips
was the Goddess' magic, delicious kiss
leaving the scent of ripe peaches on my mouth

©April 5, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton



~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (04-15-2012 09:20 PM).]

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Margherita
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1 posted 2012-04-15 06:31 AM


Exquisite, Jerry! A blessed and inspired moment wonderfully rendered. Yes, there is not a moment in which She is separated from you and when you become aware of this truth, it's pure deep delight, just as you say so beautifully.

Margherita

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-04-15 06:35 AM


I wholeheartedly concur with your assumption that there is not a moment that the Goddess is separated from me. A comforting feeling. Thank you, Margherita.

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jwesley
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3 posted 2012-04-15 09:12 AM


"there is not a moment that the Goddess is separated from me. A comforting feeling.".

Everyone has their own method of belief, don't they, my friend....you have this Goddess, others hve their God, and more have a belief of no belief at all.

Pretty write, my friend.


j.

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-04-15 09:16 AM


Thanks, J., a pretty comment from you too . . .

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2012-04-15 10:32 AM


Beautiful write, I can see it in my mind. Love this one!

Lori

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2012-04-15 10:42 AM


Appreciate your kind words, Lori.

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serenity blaze
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7 posted 2012-04-15 05:37 PM


And you..m'friend. Are playing my song!



I am enjoying this introspective side of you very much.

JerryPat2
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8 posted 2012-04-15 05:55 PM


Ah, thank you very much, Karen, for the nice-nice.

I am happy your song is my song.

Appreciate the hug and the love.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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