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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2012-04-14 01:15 AM



Vienna Calling

Yes its true we only spent
a few days in Vienna together
but we wasted not a minute
getting to know each other,
you were so willing to
get close to me,
close enough to hold,
close enough to kiss
and close enough to
deposit precious
memories into
my heart.

JamesLee
12April
2012


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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2012-04-15 06:26 AM


Very lovely, James!

Margherita

jwesley
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2 posted 2012-04-15 04:31 PM


Nice, my friend...

j.

Juju
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In your dreams
3 posted 2012-04-16 09:11 PM


This is a lovely poem, like always.

Juju

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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4 posted 2012-04-16 09:51 PM


I love the title of this one, it pulled me in for the poem.  Of course, I would have ended it with something smartalecky, like 'close enough to pick my pocket', but as always, you resist the puerile, and go for the gold.  Nicely done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

2islander2
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5 posted 2012-04-17 02:11 AM


so lovely, michael, love it, and know vienna too,

yann


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