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Open Poetry #48

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2012-04-13 12:02 PM

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There’s a woman
On her cell phone
Yelling at someone
No one can see

You could hear her
A street away
With her hand
Madly gesturing
As I pass her by

I do not smile
Or frown
Look up or down
And soon
She disappears

Not knowing
Who I am
Apart from a man
To whom she has
No keys

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Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2012-04-13 05:34 PM

Especially like that bit at the end. 'no keys'. Almost a non sequitur, but not.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2012-04-16 09:25 PM

I like this one.

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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