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Two Into One
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Two Into One |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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some men are adept a collecting a woman's fragile holding it close within their quiet hush caressing and speaking to its damage like gentle raindrops they close around the delicate these men understand women's concealed trouble sympathize with and give of their quiet in hopes it will take away fear and salve the heart breakable sometimes these men have their own dread hidden within their weary and, as they give consolation to another broken their own dark lies in wait to set loose trouble within they may plead for their own self endurance even as they comfort her lost lonely a perfect solution to this sad concern would be for both of their unstable fluttering to merge the broken into the tender fusing two together, making one from two unusual ©April 12, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
loving this tender piece my friend, you are all heart here... Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, Lori. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Good to see you still writing so well. This is very intimate and soul searching. Sorry for the cliche. Take care Eric |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Damn, Eric, good to see you again. Thanks . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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