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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2012-04-12 11:06 AM


Lacking Words


Left behind are the memories.
So many, too many of years gone by.

Time has escaped, leaving words of unease
Stripping those feelings seen through mind's eye.

Now peace fills the empty, a need to survive
As the spring of the year brings the meaning alive.

M
(inspired)

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-04-12 11:26 AM


Survival is the thing, you are correct in that. Memories. Sometimes a bad thing.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2012-04-12 06:14 PM


Thank  you, Jerry. Lately words are hard to come by although I read here every day.

M

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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3 posted 2012-04-12 07:41 PM


Would have opened this just based on your name, my friend...but the words I read made it doubly wonderful . . .

Glad to know you're still there...

j.


ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2012-04-12 07:44 PM


Words may be hard to come by sometimes but this economy of words is very expressive.

Well done Maureen and many understand more than you know.

Eric

Margherita
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Eternity
5 posted 2012-04-13 05:26 AM


quote:
Now peace fills the empty, a need to survive
As the spring of the year brings the meaning alive.


Very beautiful, dear Maureen. So good to read you!

Love,
Margherita

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