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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2012-04-12 06:37 AM



packing those boxes with empty things
wrapped in bubble wrap and tissue
so the bulges would appear bigger
and in theory lighten the load
since there was more nothing than

something spilled onto the ground then
causing discoloration of the otherwise
making it look soft and soggy perhaps
like one could fall into it quite easily
if it were to spread more quickly beyond

my boundaries which I always kept mobile
dangling from sticks that were attached
to strings that went outward from center
in no preassigned direction other than out
and around the corners of more comfortable

shoes are not needed when crossing love street

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2012-04-12 11:19 AM


Some days you make me think too much!


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Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2012-04-12 11:27 AM


Ms MMs...make that little wrinkle come above your eyebrows?  thanks ms
ice
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3 posted 2012-04-12 01:26 PM


A packing up, and leaving
A situation...one moves out
Because of intolerance, but does not realize what is left behind.

Liberals are sometimes hard to live with,
When you are not used to being with someone who doesnt like to fight.

One with mobile boundries,that does not need
Preasigned directions to enable them to walk across love street and stand together on same side.

Thats my take on it........


Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2012-04-12 01:46 PM


Iceman ...close I suspect, but only packing up the baggage of self assessment and putting it in an invisible storage locker so I can have access to it if I ever need an excuse not to cross love street.  If ya carry too much dew dew (grin) ya never take the chance again for fear you will be run over by a steam roller with flat tires.

Thanks bromigo

Nicole
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5 posted 2012-04-17 03:14 PM


You're better at packing than I am.  lol  (that might sound bad to others, but I know you know what I'm talking about - which is all that really matters)     I don't use bubble wrap though, I pack things with glue.  haha, silly moppet
Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2012-04-17 03:54 PM


Ms Moppet...I can dissolve glue with my monkey spit and Forrest Gump universal shake and break marble polishing tool.

Thanks for the eyes

jwesley
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7 posted 2012-04-17 07:39 PM


enjoyed the read, my friend, as with most of yours...

j.

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2012-04-18 05:31 AM


JW thanks amigo.  I appreciate the views.
serenity blaze
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9 posted 2012-04-18 05:51 AM


sigh.

You don't seem to believe me, but really, reading you is like Chinese Food...

*noms*

and...HUNGRY.


Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2012-04-18 07:42 AM


Ms Serene..gives you the "runs" and leaves bamboo splinters in your tongue?  Geeze I am so glad you love me..grins
bel1e
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11 posted 2012-04-25 08:00 PM


plugging that addy into my GPS as we speak...LOL.. <3

****laughing out loud @ Icy's comment:

quote:
Liberals are sometimes hard to live with,
When you are not used to being with someone who doesnt like to fight


yes, we are!  

This is the stuff that sticks to your ribs~*~*~loved it, Darkie <3

              

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12 posted 2012-06-04 12:34 PM


I didn't know where you were going... but from the first line, I knew I'd follow willingly. LOL  And I'm glad I did... I love this, DS... even if I forgot the bubble wrap and ended up with shards and splinters. *S*
Startime1955
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13 posted 2012-06-04 02:00 PM


I keep my "junk" in jars to be opened and viewed when I feel strong enough to look...I color my jars and the one that is black and red with a lock on it makes me fear the most...this poem is great...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2012-06-04 02:22 PM


BBBel1e, thanks knotty daughter..you smile me.

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Ms Suthern, thank you lady friend

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Ms Star, thank you for the blessed eyes ms

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