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Open Poetry #48

The Walls

Daddy Goose38
Member

since 2010-09-04

Posts 430
obama's a rice paper tiger

0 posted 2013-04-01 07:19 PM

The walls of Time, Circumstane and Space
are up.  I may not reach you.
If I could, if there were time,
I’d tell you about the computer classes,
About how we can’t get Skype on the computer.
Maybe tell you of my moods and despair.
And maybe you would tell me ... ...
And I would tell you how I’m hanging in there.
And we could visit every now and then.
And I would tell you all goodbye
And send you all my love.
But I can't tell you anything
  Time has evaporated.
The walls are closed.
I may not hear of you again.
And So I’ll just  keep the things you gave me,
When you passed through my life and gave your love.
And that will be enough.

Jaime

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2013-04-02 10:08 AM

This, to me, is the best I read of you , my friend. An absolutely beautiful penning.

Jimmy

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

2 posted 2013-04-03 02:12 PM

Very well written. I could feel the want, the absence, and the missing ... ... Enjoyed!

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