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Open Poetry #48

frowning at the finish

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2012-04-10 07:35 PM

* *

An oval

shines

a mirror of

the sun's first rays

as they betray

round phases of the moon.

An empty chalice

implicates

the mistress

of confessional's

doors in sanctity.

* * *

The dust arises
with the day's
glitter in a funnel cloud...

* * *

What horrors did she medicate?

The maid frowns as she whisks away

her lady's slip and gown.

* *

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2012-04-11 04:18 AM

You always serve up plenty of food for thought, Karen.
Ida

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2012-04-12 07:22 AM

An oval

shines

a mirror of

the sun's first rays

as they betray

round phases of the moon.

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Love these beginning lines especially!

M (moonchild)

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