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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2012-04-10 09:39 AM


I had forgotten how easy it was being easy
until I stopped at the stop light
and then went anyway, just because
no one else was coming or even close

so I took the opportunity to get into
knowing some stranger that was double parked
with her legs already out the door
somewhere between leaving and arriving

we shared a coffee that had moustaches
mine became dirty water colored
hers became frothy white over latin
but the smiles were the same size

and she had other things for my hands to know
she said I fit her outfit like I planned it
but she took it off so it could be worn again
if she made another wrong turn off the 101

where the cigar smoke joined improper circles

_____________

daark



[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (04-11-2012 06:58 AM).]

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Nicole
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1 posted 2012-04-11 06:52 AM


This is nice, I like it.

[This message has been edited by Nicole (04-11-2012 08:06 AM).]

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2012-04-11 07:01 AM


edited by request

thanks ms

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (04-11-2012 08:22 AM).]

Nicole
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3 posted 2012-04-11 07:53 AM


*removed by request
Margherita
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4 posted 2012-04-12 04:16 AM


What's going on at the street lights? ... this is like a song, a ballad.

quote:
but the smiles were the same size


   Love it.

Margherita

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2012-04-12 06:25 AM


Ms Mar...thanks lady friend...
nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2012-04-12 11:10 AM


Your words always leave me with a smile.


M

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2012-04-12 11:26 AM


ms MMs..thank you
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