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Open Poetry #48

Peaceful as The Sun

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2012-04-10 12:22 PM

Peaceful as The Sun

Forgiveness is a rocky road
Unlike flesh wounds and scars
The torrent of insecurities
Can wash away the foundation
Of time and and patience

However, each step down to earth
Brings a warmth, peaceful as the sun.

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-04-10 05:04 AM

Good message you have put together. Forgiving others can be almost impossible at times, but forgiving yourself is even harder.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2012-04-14 01:05 AM

very nice...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2012-04-15 05:33 PM

Very significant theme which you treat with great sensitivity and poetic skill.

Margherita

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2012-04-15 09:03 PM

Yep, yep, yep . . . Forgiveness is a tough road no matter who has to be forgiven.

good read...

j.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2012-04-16 05:07 AM

peaceful as the sun, excellent image,

yann

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2012-04-16 06:49 PM

Juju
You're such an interesting writer.
"The torrent of insecurities"
I guess all have to deal with such.
Sure makes hindsight 20-20 sometimes.

Back down to earth such a good way to bring in the peace......Nice work!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

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