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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2012-04-06 03:06 PM


            Spring Passing

The final fading blossoms
dance in the gentle breeze
to join their soft carpet
  of Spring passing
through these ancient endless hills
as they have for ten thousand years.
A warm sun graces the blue,
  immaculate sky
of graceful, floating hawks
and infinite depth and mystery.
Time is frozen in  this moment
of the ever-precious ‘now’
with yesterday and tomorrow
but a dream within a dream.

               --- b. e. adams (4/6/2012)



© Copyright 2012 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-04-06 03:16 PM


Another gem of a spring poem, my friend. Spring has really grabbed you this year. That is good for us folks who wander the halls of the Blue Room. Enchanting poetry.

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nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2012-04-06 03:45 PM


"Time is frozen in  this moment
of the ever-precious ‘now’
with yesterday and tomorrow
but a dream within a dream"


love it Bruce...hasn't this been a beautiful pre-spring to spring in PA this year?



M

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(Will Moss)

ebonygirl
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3 posted 2012-04-06 05:29 PM


What JP said ... enchanting poetry.
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Marchmadness
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4 posted 2012-04-07 12:24 PM


Enchanting, Bruce. No one creates the magic that you do with just words.
                                Ida

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5 posted 2012-04-08 10:47 AM


This is beautiful! I really enjoyed reading it.
Paul Wilson
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6 posted 2012-04-08 11:06 AM


Bruce...Really enjoyed this. Visions of Spring released with each of your words...Paul

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Paul

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