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Open Poetry #48

Under a Starry Sky

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

0 posted 2012-04-06 01:53 PM

The sun set before us
excitement in the air
a positive energy circulated
warm glows found after dusk
the music sang to us
as we danced again
and talked about anything
it was golden
when you told me where you were from
and what really matters
is what's in the heart
I walked beside you for a night
and wished it was forever
under a starry sky

Summer 2006
James Wolf III

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil)

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-04-06 02:10 PM

Ah yes, indeed, under a starry sky to be sure. I have to say that I have been under pretty much the same starry sky, but I never wrote about it as delicately and nice as this.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2012-04-06 03:56 PM

gives a warm feeling when read~~

M

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2012-04-06 05:22 PM

Sounds like a wonderful time... yes, would love a forever too. Enjoyed |||, ms. e

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2012-04-14 06:52 PM

Very nice...James

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

5 posted 2012-04-25 07:55 PM

this is lovely, Wolfy~*~*~*

XOXO

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

6 posted 2012-04-25 08:01 PM

I enjoyed this, very nice.

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

7 posted 2012-04-25 08:04 PM

Softly romantic...well done

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

8 posted 2012-04-27 12:41 PM

Very nice....brought back a similar memory for me

MICHELMAS
Member

since 2012-02-15

Posts 305
Lancashire England

9 posted 2012-04-27 10:29 AM

Starry starry night
Paint your palette blue and grey
Look out on a summer's day
With eyes that know the darkness in my soul

(quote Vincent Don Mclean)

Michael

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