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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-04-06 09:47 AM


     
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Worry's a killer
Why we allow it prime time
is human folly

©April 6, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton



~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

© Copyright 2012 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2012-04-06 09:59 AM


You are so right with this highly significant senryu, dear Jerry!


Ancestral fears last:
humankind's worst enemy
needs zen attitude


*

Thank you for making me think!


Margherita

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-04-06 10:23 AM


Thank you, Margherita, for being here and your valuable input.

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ebonygirl
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3 posted 2012-04-06 11:09 AM


Oh, this I like. Can't change things by worrying
about it. Smiling, ms. e

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-04-06 11:23 AM


So true, ms. e., but worry seems not to understand that concept. Thank you for contributing to my poetical musings.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2012-04-06 11:42 AM


you captured volumes in a handful of syllables...Why am I not surprised?  Way to go my friend  

Lori

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2012-04-06 11:49 AM


Thank you, Lori, very much.

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Marchmadness
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7 posted 2012-04-06 12:12 PM


Said a lot here with a few words, Jerry. Worry is a hard foe to defeat.
                           Ida

JerryPat2
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8 posted 2012-04-06 12:16 PM


Many thanks, Ida. Yes, worry is the cancer of the soul.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2012-04-07 12:38 PM


Worry and stress have to be cousin's...James
JerryPat2
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10 posted 2012-04-07 05:30 AM


Double first cousins, I believe, James. Thank you for your input.

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