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Coastal Fog
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan 
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Coastal fog in the distance evening time, a sad sunset twilight twinkles my thoughts lite violet and shades of peach cream distant dream.... recalled again a quiet end lost friend found again 9/2011 James D Wolf III In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil) |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
I like this poem, Wolf. Quietly remembering... an old friend ... in the present again. What will it be like this time, if there is another, this time? Ms. E |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Ebonygirl thanks for the comment, I love the translation. Always nice to find a lost friend! |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
Love the play of violet and peach colors in this, Wolfy~*~ |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
soft comfortable colors, thanks for reading bel1e. wolfy |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Most beautiful twilight emotions, dear James. Margherita |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
I like the sound of that, twilight emotions! Thanks for the comment Margherita. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
This made my eyes well with the last two lines. I lost someone to the sea, and it feels just the way you write it. I can almost hear the bouy bells. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Klassy, oh remembering an old friend lost to the sea... I hope It will lend some peace to your loss. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Lost friends are not lost to me as long as I remember them - or so I like to think. Love the colors of your thoughts. A |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very pensive and mood well captured. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Nice vibes. You inspire. Could feel this space, in the moist air...solitude beckons. |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Beautifully written...how wonderful to renew a friendship... *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i like the gentle rhyming |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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