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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-04-03 04:39 AM


sometimes at night
if the moon is bright
and . . .
after I've poured the first of two
glasses of vino
I step outside
to drink alone, leaving Zoe
my mutt inside
much to her dismay
but sometimes I need to be alone to toast the moon
and turning slightly to my right
nod at my moon shadow
so, okay
with the moon and my shadow with me
I'll admit I'm not alone
still . . .
the moon doesn't return my toast
and . . .
my shadow merely mimics me
as I sip the wine
nothing special about this moment
so why does it feel special
sometimes I toast
half-forgotten childhood friends
sometimes no
I stand there for thirty minutes or more
just me, the moon and my shadow
before returning to The Hovel
Zoe pouts
about thirty seconds
before jumping into my lap
and stares at the wine glass
I nod
dip a finger into it
she licks the burgundy off
do it again, and again
five times
I think she's an alcoholic
maybe so
at least I don't have to drink alone

©February 25, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

© Copyright 2012 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2012-04-03 05:06 AM


So very beautiful and intense, dear Jerry. I think when you stand outside under the moon and all the rest "behind" you, even your shadow, it feels like standing at the door of Universe and so you feel part of the Whole and that is very special. And then you share this intense moment with Zoe in such a tender way. She knows and you know the gift of togetherness.

Wonderful emotions.

Margherita

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-04-03 05:11 AM


You are so right, Margherita, it is an awesome moment you spoke of, and of course, Zoe and I are a perfect match.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2012-04-03 08:32 AM


And I'll bet you can't help but wonder if she is looking at the moon too, eh, my friend?

Lori

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-04-03 09:13 AM


Ah, she is looking at that moon. Smart gal, my Zoe. Thanks, Lori.

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Michael
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5 posted 2012-04-03 11:29 AM


You know, the bleakest points of my life were spent with my dog, Gizmo, (named after the gremlin for the white stripe down his nose, and the pointy ears).  As much as I whined about being "alone" in those days, it wasn't until Gizmo was taken from me that I realized I never was alone at all.  The unconditional love and forgiveness that dog lavished upon me, once realized, was all that got me through his death and truly being alone.  You're never alone Jer... I get the feeling Zoe sticks closer to you in spirit (when you're away) and mimics you more closely when your not than that ever untrustworthy shadow would even dare to.     I relate to this well, friend.

Michael

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2012-04-03 11:52 AM


Thanks, Michael, I'm sorry to hear about Gizmo. I had an old dog I had to put down two years ago, and immediately went looking for a mutt to call my own. I love mutts, not taking anything away from the pedigreed, but mutts are heartier, less likely to be sick and all the way around better doge, in my opinion, than the incestuous pedigrees. Thank you again.

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